Does it make any sense? If not please correct it!?

Grammatically it's okay, but it's a bit clunky. It's easy to picture the color black, but when you say it turns "to bleak" the reader stumbles on that image because it's hard to picture. You might want to ignore the fact that his eyes are black in this scene, since black eyes in a description are sinister, and Michael seems afraid.You could say "his eyes widened. 'I hate this!'"